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Here's the submitted version of a short I did with a few friends for Project Twenty 1, which is a contest where you have to make a short film from scratch in 21 days (like the 48 hr fest but 3 weeks). Any thoughts or critiques? I'd like to revamp this. I for sure will be re CC/grading it. Nominated for best cinematography and directing.

Thanks

GH2, flowmotion, 7-14mm, 35mm rok, 85mm rok, 135mm Canon FD but sparingly.

I like it. It was very watchable and I was wondering what would happen next. Nice job.