Quick little ad I made for my church

Surge Ad 2011 - YouTube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eB0yyxG5Hlg)

Hi Tom

I liked your ad. My only critique would be that it moved a little slow for each segment and the voice over seemed to have to speak a little slow as well.

If you could speed things up a bit - perhaps 30 seconds max. total it might help hold the excitement level.

The zoom outs seemed a bit jumpy but that was probably YouTube.

Thanks Tom that's good advice!