I've just started editing this video today but would like to get some feedback on it so far....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pdtag5aUvW0

I used a HPX170 with a diy adapter to give it an old school / urban look, but completely messed up on the focusing for all the outdoor stuff :S (I set the aperture to 2.8f but trying to walk backwards and continuously focus at such a small aperture turned out to be a very bad idea...).

Is it better to cut out some of those outdoor shots or are they bearable?