Jeffrey Kauffman
May 30th, 2011, 08:59 AM
Hey guys. I'm posting our first wedding with DSLR and wanted to get your input, critiques, etc....I know I have a lot to improve on and that's why I love reading this forum to learn from the best. Thanks!
Dorothy & Isaac on Vimeo
Jeffrey Kauffman
June 2nd, 2011, 04:59 PM
Sorry. The other link was wrong. Here it is. Where can I make improvements?
Dorothy & Isaac on Vimeo
Keith Forman
June 11th, 2011, 08:26 AM
Improvement: stop showing objects.
Colin Rowe
June 11th, 2011, 10:59 AM
Jeffrey, nice work, good selection of shots, well put together. I enjoyed it, and I am sure the couple will. I tried DSLRs for a few months, found them ideal as B cams, infills, cutaways etc. But no way could one replace my EX1 as A cam.
Keith. I dont understand the "stop showing objects" comment. We all have different styles, didnt see any over use of any shots. I guess we all look at things differentely.
Dan Asseff
June 11th, 2011, 12:16 PM
First, I think the couple will love it. But you asked for input, critiques, etc. I think the shots were good being your fist wedding with the 7D. The shot of the cake was to long. I think you were trying to kill time with it. The major thing that I would correct is the audio ducking. You cut out to soon on some and went out completely on others. Also you need to work on your slider work, try getting it smoother. Colin, I think you would love the FS100. I just got mine and love it. You get the look of DLSR without the bad. That's it for me.
Dan