For your critiquing pleasure, my first music video:

This is a password protected video on Vimeo password: "canon60d"

Shot on a Canon 60D in pretty much one day, aside form some crowd shots at a concert the night before.

I think I might know a few things I need to work on for next time, but I'd certainly love some feedback, and thanks!

I liked your use of color, lighting, set design, and concept. Pacing in editing was good. Some of the lipsync shots were off by a few frames. Fix that, and you're good to go!

Well thanks Warren, I appreciate it. Which shots did you specifically find to be off sync?

Really enjoyed the video. Very well done on all counts. If it's any use, the only synching issue these (admittedly tired) eyes saw was during the shot starting at 1.48, where the singer appears to stumble over/miss out a "fade"