I'd love some feedback!

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Jeremy - nice work! A few too many of the focus pull shots at the begining for my taste. Excellent pacing, The opening shots pulled me in. Wow you got in really close on the B&G kiss about 1/2 way through. I enjoyed it!

Art

Nice work. Particularly good edit to the feel of the music.
Around 1:00 there is a too-sudden drop in music for my taste (and the speaker is somewhat over-modulated).

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, once I got in and began editing, I realized I did a TON of pull focus shots. I definitely plan on toning that back some for the future. I was having fits with the pastor's mic. No matter how hard I tried, I just couldn't get his audio to sound right...