Our story was a little too squished in the 3 minute slot, especially for titles, credits etc. so I have finally had time (DV3 was practices for Greensboro's 48 Hour Film Festival) to make the changes which you can see here:

http://www.stephenv2.com/lost_souls/

along with the old version. We really like how the film turned out and got so many positive comments that we plan to enter it some local festivals.