New FASHION video i shot using sony z1, and edited on fcp

please take a look

YouTube - ‪Bald Beauty Behind the scenes .mov‬‎ (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HwI0LJzeq9s)

Thanks

Well, it was nicely shot and edited. My only reservation is that it felt like I watched the same video 3 times. And it never really got to the payoff. I kept asking myself what happens after all the prep-work...

Just like Perrone, I too felt like it never really delivered what it was promising. Lots of good effects and good music to shot sequences. I think that what you made of it was really good but I think that there needed to be a bit more. By all means good work though.

thanks for the feedback, the video, was a behind the scenes makeup look,

i did a short video before

here is the link

YouTube - ‪Bald Beauty Promo .mov‬‎ (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ivnrFYoTM5M)

Like both, but really like that second link you put up. I agree with Perone, the first video seemed a little repetitive, but still enjoyed it.

Ive done a photo shoot video myself, and took a slightly different approach to the style, would love your feedback.

YouTube - Salon Confidential Photo Shoot (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L6ZsEnx3Rbg)

I was really pleased with it, but there are always things I want to improve on next time!