This is an almost-finalized version of a short I co-directed, co-wrote and DP's for recently.

YouTube - BureauOfBreakups's Channel (http://www.youtube.com/bureauofbreakups#p/a/u/1/xFFY3X7k2hs)

Thoughts? Opinions? There are minor adjustments that have been made (minor re-cuts, some color correcting and a fun credit sequence) and we're just waiting on our audio guy to finish mixing so it doesn't clip so bad.

Particularly I'm interested in what you thought of the look. My skills as a DP have improved a ton, and this is the best I can do right now with the light kit we had... but I've definitely got a ways to go! Suggestions?

Funny video - well done. Well edited and filmed.

There is a small sound issue in the round table meeting scene - I hear a background squeak sound - is this intentional? Also the sound ramps through the roof when the girls start to fight - blows your ears off in earphones - maybe the effect you want - but I would soften it a little.

Overall, really well done.

With regards

Jeff