Here is something I filmed to promote a midwest hotel chain's hot food. I would love to hear what you thought of the filming quality and any suggestions you might have.

Thanks!

Druryvention: Brown Bag Dinners (HD) on Vimeo

Looked nice and clear to me.

Funny. Kept me interested. White balance in Kitchen looked cold and didn't seem to me to match up. A more mature sounding VO would make it a little more pro. Nice pace.