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Thomas Moore
April 14th, 2010, 11:29 AM
I got a good feedback last time I asked my fellow Vegas users to critique a video for me so I'm asking again.

YouTube - Jackie "3 small words" (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UlvwSsvPHOc)

Please let me know what you think about overall quality and flow of this video. Fully open to any critisism or praise :)

Thanks in advance!

Matthew Amirkhani
April 14th, 2010, 12:48 PM
Hi Thomas,


I really enjoyed the video specially the colors. Did you use any preset? which frame rate did you use?

Thanks
Matthew

Thomas Moore
April 14th, 2010, 12:49 PM
Used HMC 150's using "Spark" setting with some modifications, and WB preset at 3200k...

720/60P put onto a 23.97 timeline...

No color correction in post.

Thanks!

Thomas Moore
April 14th, 2010, 07:29 PM
and in case anybody's interested another video from the same show:

YouTube - Jackie (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V5hXku_sJ08)

Buba Kastorski
April 14th, 2010, 11:28 PM
Great video,
which I wouldn't say about performance :)

Gerald Webb
April 15th, 2010, 04:43 AM
awesum Thomas, I like doing the live music too. The quality of your footage is great for low light.
Here's one I did on my own ( i wish i could hire people but.... too poor, lol ) a couple of months ago.
YouTube - DIE FOR YOU - Tell Me Girl (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qg-M_uR3-DE)
Every time I edit one, as soon as its done I see all the things I would do differently if I started again. The learning experience never ends.
PS. as Thomas said, other opinions are always welcome :)

Thomas Moore
April 15th, 2010, 04:44 AM
Thanks Bubba...

Thomas Moore
April 15th, 2010, 04:46 AM
Gerald, quality of your video very good if you did all those camera angles by yourself and that was a live show I'm stunned and amazed :)

- vocals a bit washed out though...

Gerald Webb
April 15th, 2010, 03:18 PM
thanx Thomas,
yeah, the sound guy let me down on that one, I normally have a Rode NT4 as a room mic and a left and right from the mixing desk into a Zoom H4N, at that show I ended up with the desk audio being clipped before it even got to me, so all I had was the one room mic to work with.
Im still trying to work out the bugs but I think I can make it work with one guy and 4 cams for a live band, personally Id rather do more jobs at a lower price at the moment, at least until my cam and editing skills get a bit better.
cheers

Thomas Moore
April 15th, 2010, 05:14 PM
Try making an extra audio track copy and use the EQ to cut everything to 1K, then put on another EQ and boost up with band 3 the 2000 to 2500k range..

Might bring the vocals up a tad...

Gerald Webb
April 17th, 2010, 03:13 AM
thanks for the tip Thomas, I did one today,
YouTube - SUNDANCE KIDS - Solutions LIVE (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gsEqoTYmOeI)
with the vocals eq'd on a separate track and it does give you more control.
cheers mate :)

Thomas Moore
April 17th, 2010, 10:54 AM
Much better on the vocals :)

Putting some effects on the Master bus, might help you out as well...

I PM'd you a link to a .veg that will give you some ideas for master bus effects that I use on live shows.