I did this for one of my classes and was curious as to what you guys think.

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One pre-emptive comment I'd make is that the mouth and the words dont synch as much as I'd have liked them too, but I had to balance that with allowing enough time for the words to be read.

I though it was very effective - just the right length. The changes of shot help to reinforce the point subconsciously without being distracting. Well thought out.

Only suggestion - the voice at the beginning could have been clearer against the music (either that or I'm a potential customer).

are you in front of a cyc or a green screen?

seamless super white paper. Not sure if you'd call that a cyc because it did not have the wood backing...but it wasn't a green screen.

heres an updated version (slight changes with the "Hard to follow?" and the text after that).

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