My sister got this opening for a television show. I would like to get honest feedback about it.


Stylebrity "The Cut" TV Show Intro on Vimeo



Thanks,

Corey

A little hard to hear what they're saying with the music & vocals of the music. Aside from that it's good. A little bit bland though, in that it's just people standing in front of a backdrop talking. Not very dynamic or revealing into insight of the show.

I like the look, but you need rich sound;
also titling does not go well with the video, I would use colored , much smaller, simple font with time remapping movements,