shot this 2 camera promo video for a soul cover band, any suggestions? im not really satisfied with it. and its not as good as this other promo video i did for a band. the 1st link is the one id like suggestions on. the second link is one i was pretty satisfied with. thanks


YouTube - master (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p9LtZuaqylU) -- soul band



Bluf Promo Video EPK on Vimeo (http://www.vimeo.com/5172331) -- rock band.

dave morgan
Morgan Visual - HD Video Production (http://www.morganvisual.com)

Hi Dave,
One thing that sticks out a little is when you cut from the band to the dance floor. They look like they could be in different locations due to white balance difference. Dance part is quite yellow in comparison. The other noticeable bit was the blown highlights on the singer's (Respect) face. A little distracting but the lighting isn't ideal for that I guess. What were your thoughts about the clip? What were you not happy with?

Yeah Dave, i think it would good to start with what your not happy with. What were you going for with the piece?