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Rich Lee
March 18th, 2004, 10:26 AM
There is a short story that i really like by a well known writer. I really want to shoot a short film of it. i have contacted the writer and he asked about what i had in mind as far as money and my film credits...needless to say, once i gave him the low down, he stopped returning my emails. so, i want to make it anyway. i do not want to make any money off of it, i just want to make it. i guess once its done, if its any good i would contact him again and see if he will let me show it around at festivals or whatever...

anybody see any potential problems i that? i must stress that i do not want to make any cash from it, just a good film.

Thanks

Philip Boyer
March 18th, 2004, 10:40 AM
I think you're running a risk not worth taking. What if he sells the rights to someone else? Then you've got a film you can't use. Even though you don't plan on making any money off of it, the writer probably does and an unauthorized film floating around might hurt his chances at doing that.

At the most, I would write the script from the short story and try and show it to him, then see what he thinks.

Keith Loh
March 18th, 2004, 10:51 AM
Don't do it. What if your film does become a great success and he comes in and shuts you down at the pinnacle of your opportunity? He can have all of your material taken from you and you wouldn't even have anything to show in private.

Also think of it from the writer's point of view. What if you do a bad job and you've spoiled the market for his story. What if he is already in negotiations with another party. That could wreck those negotiations.

As a writer, I would be furious that someone asked my permission and then went ahead and did it anyway after I said no.

Write your own script or hookup with an aspiring writer. There are many out there.

Rich Lee
March 22nd, 2004, 08:39 PM
Yes, all valid points. i will keep nagging the guy, maybe he will give in, or file some sort of restraining order.

Thanks!

Ian Stark
March 23rd, 2004, 02:01 AM
I would have thought that if the film was being made for purely personal 'growth' and absolutely no financial gain and was not being showed publicly without permission then what has the writer got to be upset about?

Anyway, from what I read in the preceding posts, the writer hasn't said 'no' or that he was upset; he just hasn't responded to email.

Surely this is like making a fan film? As a writer, I would be (privately) flattered.

But, if you showed it outside your living room, I'd sue the air out of your lungs, for the reasons Keith & Philip give.

Keith Loh
March 23rd, 2004, 02:17 AM
//Surely this is like making a fan film? As a writer, I would be (privately) flattered.//

Until you saw how terrible it was. It could be so bad that it makes the subject matter laughable and so degrades your own property.

Robert Knecht Schmidt
March 23rd, 2004, 02:24 AM
There's nothing more heartbreaking than being rejected for lack of money or reputation.

When Lucas couldn't get the rights to Flash Gordon, he wrote STAR WARS. When Spielberg was refused a chance at directing an installment of the James Bond franchise, he helmed the Indiana Jones trilogy.

Come up with your own story. You may find you end up transcending your inspirational material.

Ian Stark
March 23rd, 2004, 02:27 AM
You're quite right, Keith.

What I meant was I would privately be flattered that someone was prepared to invest their own time, effort and cash in making a film of one of my stories purely for their own personal entertainment because they liked the story so much. If it's trash, it's trash, but if no-one's ever going to see it other than the filmmaker, who cares?

But I stress again, if ever it *was* seen outside the filmmakers four walls, they would be hunted down and executed. Sort of.

Ian Stark
March 23rd, 2004, 02:35 AM
Robert, personally I absolutely agree with you (and Keith, and Philip) however I think that Rich is saying he likes this story so much that he just wants to make a film of it - not for profit, not for fame, not for kudos but because it's this story and he likes it. Period.

I would argue that (if he can afford to) he should go ahead and get this one off his chest, learn from that experience then create an original piece that borrows from it (a la Flash Gordon/Star Wars and Indie/Bond).

But personally I still totally agree with your point!

Paul Tauger
March 23rd, 2004, 12:34 PM
anybody see any potential problems i that? Short answer: you can't. Period.

Copyright protection is absolute when it comes to the rights reserved to the copyright owner. One of these rights is the right to prepare derivative works. If the owner said you can't, you can't. It doesn't matter whether you make money or not. It doesn't matter if you don't exhibit it publicly. It is copyright infringement to _make_ the film.

I'm active with an organization that works with musical theater composers, lyricists and writers. I can't tell you how often someone will spend _years_ writing a musical based on a book or movie for which they can't get the rights. There must be several dozen adaptations of Catcher in the Rye floating around that will never see the light of day (the Salinger estate is notorious for not allowing any adaptations of any kind).

I would have thought that if the film was being made for purely personal 'growth' and absolutely no financial gain and was not being showed publicly without permission then what has the writer got to be upset about?Sorry, but you thought wrong. By making the film you will have prepared a derivative work. THAT is infringement. If the copyright owner wants to get nasty about it, you could be sued and found liable for statutory damages (up to $150,000) JUST for having made the project, before you even do anything with it.

Surely this is like making a fan film? All of which are illegal derivative works, unless the underlying work is in the public domain (a few films are at this point).

Rich Lee
March 23rd, 2004, 09:31 PM
The writer never said no...just never returned my emails. For all i know, he never got my replies...maybe i should try to find him through other means.

"There's nothing more heartbreaking than being rejected for lack of money or reputation."

Tell me about it Robert! I've spent alot of time this week and last trying to convince somebody, anybody to let me shoot 3 shots in a high rise in downtown l.a. Everyone wants $5000 a day, and 2million worth of insurance. im not making a 100million dollar hollywood movie! its an ART film! i'm incredibly frustrated with this town. i cant even walk into a super market with my slr camera without the manager flipin out.

sigh...

anyway, as for the short story, i will move on, and maybe someday i'll get a response from the writer. even a NO would be nice. the only good thing is, if it ever happines, that the whole short would take place in a jungle/field, so no one trying to hit me up for cash.

Dylan Couper
March 24th, 2004, 12:26 AM
<<<-- Originally posted by Rich Lee :
Tell me about it Robert! I've spent alot of time this week and last trying to convince somebody, anybody to let me shoot 3 shots in a high rise in downtown l.a. Everyone wants $5000 a day, and 2million worth of insurance. im not making a 100million dollar hollywood movie! its an ART film! -->>>

Telling them its a student short sometimes works the best. Sorry to drag you off topic briefly.

Robert Knecht Schmidt
March 24th, 2004, 12:46 AM
Checked out your web site, Rich. Nice portfolio of renderings; especially like the Minotaur and, uh, Pasiphae. What renderer?

Impressive previz résumé as well; my only complaint is that I can't read it all because my monitor isn't high enough resolution to get to the bottom of the pop-up.

If you haven't sent a reel of your films by mail to your author friend accompanied by an effusive letter, why haven't you?

Rich Lee
March 24th, 2004, 01:20 AM
Thanks Robert

glad you stayed around the front page long enough to see the little honey...there are 2 (3 sort of) if u look hard enough....

All the 3d stuff is rendered in mental ray, using either softimage 3d or XSI. most of its a bit dated, from when i was first learning the whole 3d thing, actualy, the whole computer thing for that matter. Sorry about the popup, i just fixed, should have a little scroller on the side now.

Yes, well, when i first contacted the writer, it was fall 2002, before i had shot anything, was thinking that his story would be the first thing. kinda glad that it wasnt, cause i have learned alot in that time. anyway, before i send him anything else, i want to finish up 2 more things that im working on, a short film and a music video. very excited about the music video concept, not your standard performance vid, has a bit of funky story, should be fun. as soon as i get those done i will send them over to him.

Ian Stark
March 24th, 2004, 03:21 AM
Well, it looks like Paul put us straight on this one!

I really didn't know that fan films were illegal. That's a real shame.

Thanks, Paul, for clearing the whole thing up.

Paul Tauger
March 24th, 2004, 11:08 AM
Always happy to oblige. :)

I have a computer-game developer client that is very tolerant of fan-art, fan-fiction, etc. Though it's a copyright violation by its authors, they are familiar with, and even supportive of, a number of fan websites. I don't know if this is typical, however.

Ian Stark
March 24th, 2004, 11:19 AM
I've done a little 'loose' investigation since joining this thread - it looks like "tolerated" is as good as it gets!

I wonder if the guys got permission to do Thumb Wars? If you haven't seen it - do so! It's a masterpiece and wildly funny!

Keith Loh
March 24th, 2004, 11:21 AM
Ian, it varies from creator to creator. Lucasfilm endorses fan films but only under the aegis of certain rules. As far as I can recall, if you make a Star Wars fan film, you surrender all rights to the work you do to Lucasfilm.

Other creators aren't so friendly. As I recall, the owners of Buffy were really tough even on fan sites.

You can do a search on a certain Batman fanfilm that came out last year which spawned a large thread discussing the pros and cons of fanfilms. It was very well made and basically a calling card for the professionals who made it.

Ian Stark
March 24th, 2004, 11:39 AM
Found it - now waiting for download, thanks Keith!

Of course, I would never endorse such a blatant infringement of copyright ;-)

BTW, here's a link to the official Steve Oedekerk web site preview of Thumb Wars. I can only guess that it is an authorised spoof as they are openly selling it on DVD!

http://www.oentertainment.com/InsaneO/Thumbs/thumbwars/index.html

BTW, what is an Air China Pilot?! (Other than the obvious)

Keith Loh
March 24th, 2004, 12:26 PM
I haven't read that Steven Oederk material nor seen much of "Thumb Wars" but I think it falls under parody rather than fan film. These are fine otherwise "Hotshots", "Naked Gun", "Scary Movie" and all the other Zucker Brothers' parodies of other genres could not get made.


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Air China Pilot .. that should be in a faq somewhere. Anyway, a couple years back you were allowed to have your own handle on DVInfo. So I chose Airchinapilot (on several boards, in fact) because I hadn't seen it before and it was around the time of the China - U.S. Spyplane incident. So it is just an unusual handle which Chris lets me keep because of whimsy.

Paul Tauger
March 24th, 2004, 02:58 PM
Thumb Wars almost certainly comes within the parody fair use exception to copyright infringement. It's pretty funny.

Rich Lee
March 24th, 2004, 05:05 PM
I feel that you could easily make a parody or fan film from work done by companies or writers like lucas, marvel, crichton, or king. Illegal or not. it seems to happen all the time. i feel that once u try to make cash and get it distributed you may get a cease and desist notice or worse. but if its with a writer who isn't as established in film adaptations as the big guys, image may be everything, and if somehow a film where made from that authors work, and it got out, and it were bad, then it could hurt that writers chances possibly to sell it. i get that now...

another question is, how different is this then using music for our short films? legally i mean. i have seen butt loads of short films, that use all sorts of popular music, non of which i bet have paid for those rights. Another thing is spec commercials. is that any different? how come all of the people that i know making spec commercials aren't getting their pants sued off?

Keith Loh
March 24th, 2004, 05:42 PM
Answer: They are all taking a chance.

With music as soundtrack getting rights to use it in a soundtrack is not hard and isn't that expensive. So 'fixing' it is not that hard if someone taps you on the shoulder (though certain artists simply do not want their songs used to sell certain products or any products). And if the song has to be pulled, then you can license another song and perhaps re-edit. Hard but not a film killer.

People who base their entire production around a copyrighted idea or property that they do not own are risking what we have already discussed in this thread. So their risk is very great as compared to ripping music.

In all these cases, the risk could be even higher if the wronged party decides to sue for damage.

I've seen many spec commercials too and for the most part, they are not harming the brand they are appropriating. However, you can bet that a work that maligns the brand will be reacted to in a strong way.

By the way, I know a local filmmaker personally who did a fan film on what was then an upcoming movie. It got a nice link on a major fan site and he got some attention from it. The film took existing material and animated it into a 'preview' for the film. He got a note from the studio that was promoting it saying basically: 'aw gee that was nice but please take it off'. As I recall, he even got a meeting with the studio and a tour. He still had to take it off but in the end it was amicable. But many copyright owners act much more forcefully to protect their brand. Corporations are jealous individuals who can act unfairly, throw their weight around and frankly only care about themselves. You take a risk when you mess with their stuff.

Robert Knecht Schmidt
March 25th, 2004, 12:21 AM
"i have seen butt loads of short films, that use all sorts of popular music, non of which i bet have paid for those rights."

If it was screened at a festival, the producers paid for the rights.

Paul Tauger
March 25th, 2004, 12:35 AM
I feel that you could easily make a parody or fan film from work done by companies or writers like lucas, marvel, crichton, or king. Illegal or not. it seems to happen all the time. i feel that once u try to make cash and get it distributed you may get a cease and desist notice or worse. . .Parody comes within fair use, which is a defense to copyright infringement. In other words, the doctrine exists to preclude infringement liability IF, in fact, it truly is fair use. You still might get a cease and desist demand, and get sued as well, but the parody fair use defense would preclude liability. Of course, you'll have to pay someone like me a hundred thousand dollars or more (frequently lots more) to defend the suit and raise the defense. And whether or not you do it for cash doesn't matter one bit. Do a search on my name and copyright and you'll find lots of threads where I discuss this.

how different is this then using music for our short films?Enormously different. There are specific requirements for parody fair use, and they're fairly complicated. At minimum, however, to be fair use parody, the original has to be the subject of the parody (and it is in Thumb Wars), and no more of the original can be taken than is necessary to "conjure up" the original (the so-called "conjure up test"). Again, Thumb Wars satisfies this test. Copying music to use on your video is not parody and doesn't come within fair use.

i have seen butt loads of short films, that use all sorts of popular music, non of which i bet have paid for those rights.You'd lose the bet. They all had permission. If they didn't, the cease-and-desist is already in the mail.