Jawad Mir
April 12th, 2009, 08:59 PM
Last month, I added a highlight video from Macy and David's Wedding that was held at Liberty Grande in Toronto.
And incidentally, I filmed another wedding at the same venue. However, so that they don't look alike, I tried to give it different look and feel.
Would love feedback
Stephanie + Rocco - Wedding Highlights on Vimeo (http://vimeo.com/4124601)
Thanks
Bradley Ouellette
April 12th, 2009, 09:21 PM
That was really nice. What song was that... I remember it from somewhere but I'm baffled. It is stuck in my mind.
Jawad Mir
April 12th, 2009, 10:48 PM
Thanks dude.
It's from Slumdog Millionaire:)
Matt Barwick
April 12th, 2009, 11:19 PM
Hi Jawad,
I like what you've achieved with the overall feel of the clip. The focus pulls and colouring were nice, as was the incorporation of the speeches & vows. I'm sure the couple must love it!
There was a couple of little things let it down for me though.
The zooms during the slow frame rate dancing were a bit jarring - I'm personally not a fan of zooms anyway :|
The dissolve around 0:57 (from the miniature figurines & the couple kissing, to the building pan) didn't look right?
The invitation footage at 1:13 looked a little too 'hand held' in comparison with the rest of the clip.
I really like the frame hold at the end of her speech, but it sounds like after that it cuts to a different section of applause when you cut to the 'Liberty Grand' building.
There's also some kind of horizontal smearing around 2:09 which was a little off-putting. Not sure if it's a desired effect or a camera issue.
Hope you were after this kind of feedback - if not, please ignore..! I actually found it quite entertaining, and the above comments are based on the viewpoint of a videographers eye.
Thanks for sharing!
Cheers,
Matt.
Jawad Mir
April 13th, 2009, 08:15 PM
Thanks for your honest feedback. Some of the stuff was intentional and some of it was something I wish that I could have done differently. But it's a learning process.
Always trying to be better but perfect:
Thanks again
Hi Jawad,
I like what you've achieved with the overall feel of the clip. The focus pulls and colouring were nice, as was the incorporation of the speeches & vows. I'm sure the couple must love it!
There was a couple of little things let it down for me though.
The zooms during the slow frame rate dancing were a bit jarring - I'm personally not a fan of zooms anyway :|
The dissolve around 0:57 (from the miniature figurines & the couple kissing, to the building pan) didn't look right?
The invitation footage at 1:13 looked a little too 'hand held' in comparison with the rest of the clip.
I really like the frame hold at the end of her speech, but it sounds like after that it cuts to a different section of applause when you cut to the 'Liberty Grand' building.
There's also some kind of horizontal smearing around 2:09 which was a little off-putting. Not sure if it's a desired effect or a camera issue.
Hope you were after this kind of feedback - if not, please ignore..! I actually found it quite entertaining, and the above comments are based on the viewpoint of a videographers eye.
Thanks for sharing!
Cheers,
Matt.
Taky Cheung
April 19th, 2009, 12:18 PM
Nice work.
Tranditional Chinese sentense read from right to left. So at 0:20, the camera pan in the wrong direction :)
Stephen J. Williams
April 19th, 2009, 05:13 PM
Jawad...
Great work. Really enjoyed the story that you painted. Classically done!