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Ryszard Strzelczyk
March 18th, 2009, 03:43 AM
Hello everyone,

here's one of my recent clips

Kora & Łukasz on Vimeo (http://www.vimeo.com/3715704)

Please write what do you think about it.

R.S.

Lukas Siewior
March 18th, 2009, 06:14 AM
I like it a lot. Very nicely edited and heart-warming. I'd just add a little of slow-motion and maybe a little of coloring to get away from common video-look. But that just for my taste - you might like it differently.

What camera have you used? Which steadicam?

P.S. Pozdrowienia z USA ;-)

Art Varga
March 18th, 2009, 08:22 AM
Hey Ryszard - I noticed a few wobbles with the stabilizer and some of the scenes seemed a little dark. You had two separate scenes of applying lip gloss - one would have been enough. I know that trying not to repeat your shots is hard sometimes. Otherwise - great job! I especially liked the closing shots starting with the colorful sunburst to the end - beautiful! - Thanks for sharing.

Art

Martin Wiosna
March 18th, 2009, 07:29 PM
i'm impressed with the quality of that video, yes what camera was used for that?

I know people love to talk about these great SD cameras, but I'm a sucker for HD.

After watching anything in HD is so hard to go back.

Great job!

Ryszard Strzelczyk
March 19th, 2009, 01:38 AM
Thanks for comments.

It's good to know what other people think about your work. I think it's one of the best ways to make it beter.
I'm using Sony HDR-FX1, Steadicam Merlin and Sony Vegas Pro 8 to edit.


R.S.

Lukas, muszę Ci powiedzieć, że piękną mamy w Polsce zimę tej wiosny ;-)
Pozdrawiam.

Terry Taravella
March 19th, 2009, 12:30 PM
R.S.....nice work. The quality is fabulous.

I do think you should cut the shot at :40 where she's putting the lip gloss on, it's not a very flattering shot from a female's point of view.

Thanks for sharing!