View Full Version : First try with music video


Lukas Siewior
January 16th, 2009, 11:08 PM
Here is a music video I've shot with my friends for a small contest.

I'd like to hear your opinions - specialy about overall look. I know that some scenes are overexposed - what would be your sugestion to make those signs more readable???

Enjoy!
YouTube - Above & Beyond - Oceanlab - On A Good Day (competition video) (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I_KWgR1gni0&fmt=18)

or here:
Above & Beyond - Oceanlab - On a Good Day on Vimeo (http://vimeo.com/2541118)

Sam Rosado
January 19th, 2009, 09:26 AM
great video! I love the song. the only thing that disturbs me is the writing on the paper which in some shots you cant see. other than that its great. good job

Lukas Siewior
January 19th, 2009, 01:41 PM
great video! I love the song. the only thing that disturbs me is the writing on the paper which in some shots you cant see. other than that its great. good job

Thx. I'm well aware of the writing. We couldn't tell if its readable enough untill post. Other issue was that on big computer screen the writing looks better then on YouTube. I guess next time Ill use bigger paper and thicker markers :-)

Charles Mabry
January 19th, 2009, 06:29 PM
Brilliant Idea.... Great great job. Im a new film student and the work on here as just amazing. Larger paper and marker next time!