Trailer for my short currently being submitted to festivals.

The the story of a hookup that leaves a lasting impression on both people involved.

Vimeo

The Meeting on Vimeo (http://vimeo.com/2543893)

or youtube

YouTube - The Meeting - trailer (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkEZNlhmD5Y)

Shot on an HD100 and cut on FCP 6

would love feedback on this and the my other work @ myspace.com/thepegasuscompany or youtube.com/pegasuscompany

Cheers!

yo.. i liked the shots where the camera was pulling back from the person it was focused on..

but some of the other shots, not so much. like the first black and white shot of the guy sitting there and the camera pans from right to left.. the movement is not smooth at all..

and the part where it has some really quick cuts.. i was like, huh? not sure why you did that...

also not sure what the guy says out loud in the very beginning!

just some minor feedback, it is just a trailer after all... i am slightly intrigued about what this 'hook up' entails.. heh.

All I told the editor was that i wanted a trailer with much dialog :)

The shot of guy sitting there ended up much choppier after I exported the trailer, I'm not sure why. Its also backward and slowed down, so is it wasn't 100% smooth to begin with.

Thanks for the feedback!

FYI folks,

There's a high quality version on exposure room

The Meeting - Trailer By Sanjay Sooknanan On ExposureRoom (http://www.exposureroom.com/themeetingtrailer)

Feel free to add thepegasuscompany to exposureroom, vimeo, youtube or myspace!

This was a nice trailer but i don't think i heard any voices at all. it was good all the way up until they started kissing! lol

j/k good trailer

Ha! Thanks for the feedback Derrick. Maybe i should add a disclaimer :)

Hey Folks,

The full film is now online. Watch, comment and repost if you like!!

Vimeo
The Meeting on Vimeo (http://www.vimeo.com/5691940)

Exposure Room
http://exposureroom.com/members/thepegasuscompany.aspx/assets/60a3dbd37ef04b4cb0bac8d00ec693aa/

Thanks in advance!