Prewedding story shot this Wednesday and shown yesterday on reception
Sergey & Anastasia prewedding on Vimeo (http://vimeo.com/1592440)

Appreciate any comments and opinions!

Nice.
1:53 and 2:02, how did you get the height on those shots ?

Paul

Absolutely beautiful and entertaining to watch! It was kind of funny that the bride was very alluring and seductive, but that the groom was a bit of a goofball. That's their personalities probably, though, so it's probably best you went with that.

Loved the colors and angles.

One of the shots I might have left out was the 2nd shot of the groom making a "heart shadow" with his hands behind the dress. The first shot was just perfect and magical, and the second shot seemed to give away the secret behind it and took some of the magic away. The second shot just kind of revealed the setup behind the shot, while the first shot did not and was just perfect.

Great video. Thanks for sharing!

Thanks, Paul, Travis!

High shots are HV-20 on monopod
Couple was that kind of behavior on the wedding too.. And it's quite common in life when two different characters complete each other to the whole :)
For that revealing shot.. may be you right! I thought first shot without second seem like children games with projections.. not clear enough I would say..

Can you suggest better ending or that will do?
I have opinions that it too bad.. But like them running away though

It's hard to suggest a different ending when we don't know what other footage you might have. I thought the ending was fine, although the last shot should have been cut a bit sooner. You can see the camera shake right at the end of the dissolve. Cut it a second earlier and it would be fine.

Ok, thank you!
I see it's shaky.. but not enough to treat as effect, yes!