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Gustavo da Luz
May 2nd, 2008, 06:00 AM
Preview of GRALHEIRA Portuguese village

http://www.vimeo.com/963372
Gustavo da Luz
May 6th, 2008, 06:16 AM
Preview of GRALHEIRA Portuguese village

http://www.vimeo.com/963372

I apologise for not being translated into English but is somewhat complicated translate the poem and thought of this person. He talks about the village and his love of land.
Monday Isa
May 6th, 2008, 07:46 AM
Gustavo I really liked your clip. The feel and the flow was excellent. I'm learning a lot by seeing shorts like these and Phil's and many others here. I film events here in Maryland and have developed a style that I really love and now want to implement film techniques into my style. Seeing these shorts across this board is a treat. 2 things I want to mention. 1. A lot of your shots were underexposed, the opening shot of the goats the guy speaking, and so forth. That can be you wanted to get a max in your dynamic range. It would have been nice to have used the curves in your clip to get the color to really pop. 2. There's a spot at the bottom of your lens that was present in your video. Besides that fantastic composition filming and story telling! Thanks for sharing

Monday
Gustavo da Luz
May 9th, 2008, 03:35 AM
Gustavo I really liked your clip. The feel and the flow was excellent. I'm learning a lot by seeing shorts like these and Phil's and many others here. I film events here in Maryland and have developed a style that I really love and now want to implement film techniques into my style. Seeing these shorts across this board is a treat. 2 things I want to mention. 1. A lot of your shots were underexposed, the opening shot of the goats the guy speaking, and so forth. That can be you wanted to get a max in your dynamic range. It would have been nice to have used the curves in your clip to get the color to really pop. 2. There's a spot at the bottom of your lens that was present in your video. Besides that fantastic composition filming and story telling! Thanks for sharing

Monday

Hello Isa...thanks for your comment... :)
I gave the style in post-production such as underexposed, spot effect, blur...but i´m steel working on that... ;)
Kajito Nagib
May 10th, 2008, 06:49 PM
Linda poesia!